Nick Reynolds: The Lonely Giraffe: It introduces the main character very well. Tell more about how the other giraffes treat him. Extend when Alejandro comes with Mike. Tell more about how they got killed.
Sean Eykel: He bit off more than he could nip: Good introduction. Good storyline. Written well. Whole story is written well. Humorous.
Brittany Holmes: RAFT: Good build-up. Introduces topic well. Makes everything intense. Keeps reader hooked. Overall a well written story.
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